关 键 词: 好朋友 小学三年级 250字
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Hello every one. My name is Winne. I am not beautiful but I think I am very friendly.I have small eyes, small mouth and big ears I have some good friends. My best friend is Jolin. She is more beautiful then me but I am more lovely then her. She often helps me English every morning. I love my best friend Jolin.名师点评:莹莹同学首先要注意的是你的英文输入,空格键和大写键要会用啊,还有标点符号,这些都是写作文最基本的。SheoftenhelpsmeEnglisheverymorning。这句话有语病。应该是She often helps me English in the morning.或者She helps me English every morning.明白了吗?其他没什么大问题。(学乐中国特聘教师:刘冰婕老师)2008-11-6 12:56:00