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January 12th, 2002Dear Mr. President,I’m very lucky to attend this world-famous university, but I’m afraid I’m not content with the canteen service on campus.Firstly, the quality of the dishes should be improved. Undoubtedly, there are a lot of delicious dishes, but all the year round, they are the same. More and more students are complaining about eating the same food each day. So I think the most urgent problem is variety.Secondly, the price is a bit too high. Many of us hope that the canteen can provide us with not only delicious but also cheaper food.Finally, the environment is so noisy that we can’t enjoy our meals in good mood. I suggest that there be some soft music to help us relax.These suggestions are not just of my own, but also of may other students. We hope our respectable president will pay attention to our suggestions.By the way, the canteen workers are very patient and always smiling. So I think if our university offers them better conditions, they will offer us better service. Best wishes,名师点评：优点：文章对英文作文的写信的格式基本正确。能够较好的表达自己的思想，开门见山提出问题。并且文章层次分明，利用Firstly、Secondly这些序列词汇使文章井井有条。缺点：1.每个单词之间要有空格,便于阅读。2.一些语法错误，例如：“butI’mafraidI’mnotcontentwiththecanteenserviceoncampus.”应该改为“But I''am afraid that I''am not contented with the canteen service on campus.”等（学乐中国特聘教师：赵晓辉老师）2010-4-22 12:52:00