关 键 词： 小学六年级 500字
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Mr Xu is our principal,he is a handsome men.he is tall and strong,but he is strict;lady Yu is our Chinese teachers,she is forty_five old,she is thin but she is smart.she often play games with us.she said:it can make us clever to play different kinds of games;lady Tu is our math teachers.she is tall and thin,but she is very strict, when she angry, classmates all afraid;lady Luo is our English teacher,she looks so young like our elder sister.she is kind and funny.名师点评：This article introduces primary author''s teachers,they are Mr xuis,Miss Yu,Miss Tu and so on.They are all good teachers,they are strict to students and responsibility to work.文章用英语简单地介绍了小作者的老师，分别描绘了老师的外貌和教学特点。表达清楚，描绘细致。但是作为英语作文，老师要提出几点语法上的错误。第一：女老师我们在英语上称呼一般用“Miss”；第二：“she often play games with us”是一般现在时，第三人称后的动词应该用“plays”；第三：“lady Tu is our math teachers”，是单数形式，应该是“lady Tu is our math teacher”。但是总体来说，小作者的英语作文还是不错的，而且在单词的运用上也非常丰富哦！希望小作者在今后的写作中多注意一下细节问题。（学乐中国特聘教师：许奕文老师）2009-9-6 17:43:00